Hello Everyone i wanna announce an update, polished the story by fixing a few plot holes, fixed the grammar to something better, changed the way i spelled french to france at the start, changed the grizzly bear in chapter 1 to a brown bear after i searched up more that grizzly bears DO NOT live in france, continued on chapter 5 which is at least 3 times the size of the first chapter, introducing multiple new characters with unique personalities, changed how it looks at the end of each chapter from----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------BY EPIC OUTLAWS EDITSHOPE YOU HAD FUN READING CHAPTER ??----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------TOBY EPIC OUTLAWS EDITSHOPE YOU HAD FUN READING CHAPTER ??----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------and even if it cannot be seen good here, the difference is that i removed the line above and putted both my name and the hope you had fun writing in the middle, my name being on top of it. via /r/ebooks https://ift.tt/GEP15jS
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